I guess these last few pages have bee a whole lot of nothing, except maybe to set up the only fesible situation where Mamoru would let Dimande stay with him (breathing).
Mamoru's pretty clever.
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And I don't think even Dimande is perverse enough to pelvic thrust behind Usagi's back. xD
Although flipping Mamoru the bird as she turns to find him some snacks... hmm.
Wow, can you believe it's page 57 already? It didn't seem like that much to me, but that's more than half of a hundred, you guys. This is serious!!1 D:
I do this every now and then, so - here I go, doing it again.
What sort of things do YOU want to see happen in the future of 4KH? I've only got about ninety-something pages of script worked out, and I have some solid ideas to include in the future, but not many little things to pad it out. So what sort of scenes would rock you? I've already made a note of ones people have mentioned in the past, but it'll be a while before anything you suggest actually shows up in the comic, so please be patient~.
I'm sorry but Mamoru is one sharp cookie to pull that out of his ass so quickly...kudos to him! And Safir's "OHTHANKFUCK" gesture in the last panel is abso-fucking-lutely perfect! Ah, I'm still basking in the glow of Mamoru's sudden sensitivity...smart guy.
OMFG you're asking me what I would like to see in 4KH?? You're going to regret asking this:
-Kunzite has to attempt to use his iPhone
-Neph + boobies..any situation. either he grabs them, or sees them, or gets hit in the face with them or someone else sees some and tells him about them...anything with Neph and ( o )( o )
-someone be shirtless
-Jadeite gets detention/arrested/ trouble in skool/something where a "guardian" AKA Mamoru has to go pick him up and gets to ground him. Actually, anything with Jadeite suffering because he's a minor. Going to the bar? Um, no you're not, kiddo! Sit your ass down! XD
-Encore of the popped collar!
-Cockblocks starting to backfire
-What the bathroom looks like after 7 guys have used it. Does the budroom have its own bathroom?
-Ass kicking hats, again?
That's all I can think of for now, I'm sure that more will follow when I can brainstorm a bit.
>D GO, MAMORU. He's shaping up to be a good tactian on the fly to go along with that uppercut of his. I APPROVE.
Oh, Saffir, fufu. Oh, buddy, I feel your relief! Diamond's pout is beautiful by the way. :D (What, no pelvic thrusts? Well, I'll have to suffice with the mental image I have from it...)
Umm, umm, things to add? ...Can we get some FishEye in here? :D Although...he would look a lot like Zoi, but they could ...crossdress together? More Asunuma, perhaps still fanboying/stalking Mamo? Oh, seconding the Zoi+V shopping spree! Hotaru pwning them all in a video game?! ...yeah, I dunno.
Oh Mamoru you smooth mofo. The whole Diamond and Saffir thing has been hilarious. And way to go for smacking him one in the jaw!
I don't know why but Kunzite's comment about freeloaders had me rolling on the floor.
And is it just me or has the art gotten awesome in these last few pages. I know it was good beforee but recently...girl I would pay my left arm to draw comics like that!
More things I'd like to see:
-Diamond getting in on the bet
-Haruka getting in on the bet
-Zoisite hitting on Saffir
-Small lady popping up and hitting on Diamond
-Mako beating up Neph, again.
-Jadeite getting action, because he has a popped collar. How could he not??
Wow. Seriously. That's some major light on your feet thinking there. Though it makes me wonder, did Usagi corner him into this on purpose? Is she the master genius here? hmmm...interesting.
Things I want to see:
-Neph and Jupiter oodles and oodles of blunt, coarse, cocky, HI-frickin-larious Neph, and the fights, brawls, sexy, sweet? altercations he gets into with Mako. Specifically when he samples her cooking and thus effectively decides she is the woman he must marry.
- Saffir some how getting one over on Diamond, don't know how but it should be funny.
- Kunzite punching Diamond in an attempt to make the latter look less like the former.
-Diamond hitting on all the girls in an attempt to piss everyone off.
OH, SAFFIR! You're so adorable! XD And why, Mamoru my dear, I didn't know you had it in you! I'm impressed! ;)
My 4KH Wish-List? Why, thank you, I'm glad you asked:
-Kunzite gets a sexy suit like Dimande- or really, if he could just get out of that awful shirt I'd be happy.
-MORE SAFFIR! Possible Saffir/Petz?
-Minako/Zoicite Shop Off! It. Would. Be. EPIC.
-Chibiusa showing up, with Helios in tow, and totally channeling her Inner Black Lady and coming on to Dimande, freaking out Helios and Mamoru in the process (Specific? Who, me?)
-Artemis becoming protective of Minako and attacking Kunzite. Because a Kunzite with a big cat scratch on his face would be a Sexy!Kunzite.
-Another blast from the past? Adonis, anyone?
LOVE this page! Especially the last panel. Can we have some one-on-one time with Mamoru and his future son-in-law, teenage Helios? Haha. Or what if Helios has to join the bet? What if Helios has to go to high school with Jadeite? They could do the popped collar thing together!
The four Ayakashi sisters showing up and hitting on the Kings would be pretty funny too. They are humans in the anime now, anyway, right? Or the dead manga version of the sisters would be pretty interesting too.
Oh Mamoru, well done. On one hand, he totally just pwned Demando by getting him out of Usagi's house, but on the other hand, Demando still totally pwned him by ending up in HIS.
Just this one page makes me love Saffir, and the dear boy has barely said ten words since he appeared.
More ideas off the top of my head:
- Ami tries androgyny in order to appeal to Zoisite. +10 if she looks hot in a tight little suit vest.
- Jadeite gets to pull an emo teenager YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND ME act, complete with door-slamming and shouting "You're not my dad" at Mamoru.
- More Mamoru + chocolate. What happens if people try to steal it? How easily can he be bribed with it?
- Mamoru trying to conspire with Luna to get Usagi in bed OR Luna lives up to her Dub Nanny Voice and does ultimate cockblock.
- Kunzite/Artemis face-off.
Dude, you've got like eight billion Chibi Usa/Helios fans all over you and she's not even in the comic yet. I'll hold off on desires for her until I see what kind of brilliance you've got in store for us.
Nice, Mamoru. In one fell swoop he keeps Dimande out of his girlfriend's house and creates a Sparkly Background of Love and Sensitivity powerful enough to cause SIX shine-marks in Usagi's eyes.
...ah, but his victory is his defeat.
Since you're opening the floodgates... Yume's wishlist/random ideas:
-Chibiusa appears and she's *much* older. Like, ninety. XD
-Artemis vs. Kunzite
-The Starlights come back. Zoisite has the hots for Seiya only to discover that he's a lesbian.
-Dimande/Minako? Him using her as a substitute Serenity and her using him as a substitute Kunzite? Or even a case of mistaken identity?
-Chibiusa's boyfriend is sometimes a horse. Surely there is humor to be had at his expense. ^^;
-Kenji finds out about the bet x.x
-Neph learns about Makoto's crush on Motoki and gets jealous. (I'm curious, is this universe's Motoki the blond haired big brother, or turtle-boy?)
Usagi wins the bet...
I think Mamoru constantly underestimates her and it would be amusing to see that all his fears and tiptoeing around the topic of sex is completely unnecessary. I mean, come on. She fantasized about Tuxedo Kamen on a regular basis. She may be naive, but she's not *that* innocent and she's older now. I'll bet she's just as horny for him as he is for her. lol
wow you ARE getting a lot of comments now D: your totally famous XD
what would i like to see you ask? whats that you say? my idea is the best and your definitely going to include it? -cough cough-
well since you asked so nicely XD i would like there to be a serious battle at the end. im not sure where your going as far as villains and the problem but id like to see the scouts get trashed (not really kidnapped, but trashed) and have the kings save the day!
smooth impromptu countermove, Mamo-chan, very smooth. Brains AND brawls :D. How can Usagi not fantasize about such a testosterone-y, yet sensitive display of masked cunning? I bet she already has pink-coloured condoms ready in her subspace pocket :D . Yes, I approve the 'Usagi is a master deceiver' theory.
About suggestions for panels to come... well, Charlie, Venusorbit, Branwen and Spirit already listed some excellent ones.
One thing more... if Demando tries the round of seduction with all the girls, please have him hip-thrusting Haruka and/or trying the moves on Zoi (before realizing the latter is male) ? :D . Or hitting on Ikuko while mistaking her for Luna in her human form?
Also... if Kunzite were to punch Demando because they resemble each other, what could Mamoru and Saffir do about *their* resemblance instead? :D
I second having Jadeite grounded and throwing a fit like a rebellious teenager XDD.
Possibly he meets Helios at school and they are pooped collars twins XD (second that too).
While I wouldn't mind the Four Sister to be in the story, a guilty pleasure of mine is Setsuna x Saffir <3 .
I luff Zoi. The more of him, the happier junkie I become *winks*
And the more seductive!Ami I can see, the more I squee :D
Oh, lordy, Saffir's reaction completely made my evening! I could totally hear that high-pitched squeak of relief (if only he had dropped to his knees and hugged Mamoru's legs in appreciation ;) I'm sure he'll just buy him a box of chocolate later, heehee). Just found the comic thru your DA page, I couldn't stop reading it.
Aaaaand, to jump on the suggestion bandwagon:
Yume and Spirit-hime already touched on my ideas of Luna's ::cough:: interferrence ::cough:: interaction's with the bet, as well as reintroducing the ohsolovely Starlights ((whose accidental bath peeping scene was better - Mamoru's or Seiya's? Ego battle!!))
-Since's the secret's out to Ail and An about Mamo + Usa's (lack of) intimacy, they decide to hire the happy couple as babysitters for the young'ns. Thing's catch on fire, a kid goes missing, etc.
-Jed struggles to show Rei his devoted "Knight in Shining Armor" side by hiring a kid from school to harass her so he can step in and attempt to save the day.
-Mako invites the girls over to her apartment for a Girls' Night In. A nice callback to ep. 184, perhaps?
-Somewhere along the way, a trip/date to an amusement park or festival (it was like obligatory that each season had one of these types of episodes for some reason). Not sure of whom the couple would be, though.
-Lastly, Adventures in Job Hunting! (so much fun!)