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[Demande shrugs with a dismissive smirk.]
DEMANDE: Honestly, I couldn't care less about him, he's merely in the way. / My true desire is to claim that which I have always loved- / 'Tis a tale of forbidden romance, and star-crossed royals, and the destruction of a strong but cruel kingdom. / It would be lost on you.
[Kunzite half-smiles to himself, glancing away, resting his head on his knuckles.]
KUNZITE: Oh, I don't know...
[Demande moves to get past Kunzite, but Kunzite blocks him with a foot, arms crossed with a slightly patronising smile. Demande is not amused.]
DEMANDE: Maybe he has some manner of toxin in the kitchen-
KUNZITE: No, no, that's far enough. / I have probably humored you too much.
DEMANDE: ... Awfully nosey for a roommate. / Who ARE you?
[Kunzite smiles pleasantly and points a thumb at himself.]
KUNZITE: Hmm... If you're Endymion's future, then we're his past. / And it's our job to protect him.
[Demande smirks down at Kunzite, hands on his hips. Kunzite shoots him a grin back.]
DEMANDE: Well may I just say, you're doing a terrible job.
KUNZITE [SMUGLY]: Why? Is there some threat?

Posted March 17th, 2010, 6:07 pm

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starmie (Guest) commented (March 17th, 2010, 7:42 pm):

I think it might've been a bug. My Firefox hasn't been the same since I updated it.x_x Sorry for causing panic.

Gotta love Kunzite's logic.XD

Spirit-hime commented (March 17th, 2010, 7:52 pm):

LOVE the new layout, Frizzy! It's way cleaner and easier on the eyes than before. Also very cool with the scattered panels at the top.

Kunzite's smug grin at the end is AWESOME. I had faith that he would pwn Dimande simply via badassery, and he totally did.

"You're spitting." Ha.

supercutefoxy (Guest) commented (March 17th, 2010, 10:30 pm):

HAHA! I love Kunzite in the last panel.
and Dimande called him an old man. LOL!

GreenInkling (Guest) commented (March 17th, 2010, 11:13 pm):

Aw, I'm enjoying Dimande being in the story. Zoisite is also pretty cute. I think the relationships between him and Ami and Kunzite and Minako will make for an interesting manga!

mealchan commented (March 17th, 2010, 11:31 pm):

Don't be so hard on yourself; Kunzite looks pretty darn good in this strip. And hey, at least you can draw body proportions accurately...mine always end up with extra long legs and big heads :-(

BLL (Guest) commented (March 18th, 2010, 2:21 am):
Kunzite's an old man...
A smexy old man. (Gerontophilia? *lulz*)

Wow, you got told Demando! (I knew Kunzite was going to zing him sooner or later.)

*Lol's at Nemesians(?) having Aussie accents.* You slay me.

Last Haven (Guest) commented (March 18th, 2010, 6:04 am):

Oooh, Kunzite, your awesome only continues to grow. I love how relaxed he is in that last panel. "Hah, yeah, no. Go to bed." :D So cool~.

I like the dynamic between them here. You can tell which one of them is in charge here.

Diamond's got great hair and eyes in that first panel, yum.

Dragonicsoul commented (March 18th, 2010, 6:16 am):

Diamande, you're one crazy stalker, you know that, right?


Pia-chan commented (March 18th, 2010, 5:27 pm):

"Do you know where he keeps his bleach?"

On the shelf, between his copies of "Yu Yu Hakusho" and "Fullmetal Alchemist". :p

I love Kunzite's expression in the last panel, as well as his comment about Mamoru not being stupid enough to drink mothball coffee. Besides, I imagine that anyone who can survive Zoisite's cooking could withstand ingesting pretty much any household product.

On the new layout... I really like it. However, I think you need to add a bgcolor="#ffffff" in there somewhere. *pulls up page source* Uh... then again, it looks like you're using CSS, and I'm really only familiar with basic HTML, so I'm not sure if that's the right code.

I just mention it because it looks like you didn't set a background color. When this happens, the browser defaults to the color set by the user (at least for Windows users, that is). 99% of the time, people leave it white. But weirdos like me change it to something else. As a result, I see <a href="">this& lt;/a>. (Does HTML work in the comments? Guess I'll find out...)

About their voices, it's been over a decade since I heard the English dub, so I only have the vaguest recollection of what they sounded like. As a result, I imagine them with their original Japanese voices. Perhaps a bit younger (and less evil) sounding.

VO1 commented (March 18th, 2010, 10:14 pm):

Draconicsoul: I'm pretty sure the count is now:

Kunzite: 2
Diamond: 0
Mamoru: -50

And I THINK our sexy wifebeating Cold-as-mofo-ing-ICE king has a bit of a crush! Or something!

I'm subscribing to the Usagi school of thought, which is that Demando and Safir aren't necessary evil anymore (no black moon thingies) but he still carried over a bit of the crazy and maybe doesn't understand that in this world, Murder is Bad mmkay. It's like...a period of adjustment or something. At least I hope, because I kind of want to see him facedown on a bartop sobbing out his innermost feelings to like...Nephrite or someone, while they pat his shoulder and reassure them that they are not ugly losers and that there are other fish in the sea.

OR Mamoru filling that role XD "Hey man, chin up. It's cool, you know...they'll be other girls, and um. Hey wait, you're moping about my wife D:< NM, FU!"

Also another vote that I'm dying from the pretty! The muscles! the faces! The hair! V want!!! And HAAA...yeah go to bed Demando. Save the crazy for later.

Yume (Guest) commented (March 18th, 2010, 11:26 pm):

Kunzite continues to grow more awesome with every panel :D I think you've really captured both the "Arabian king" and "older brother" aspects of his personality. Like the way he sort of humors Dimande, or the fact that in spite of being cool as ice in dealing with the latter's scheming, he still manages to have some empathy.

Which makes me wonder... Is that an "I can understand that" as in he's been through something similar, or is he just saying that he doesn't have to be in love (or lust as it were) to know what it is?

akagenki commented (March 19th, 2010, 9:13 am):
I've been out of town for a while so I had some catching up to do. Wow, its a good thing Dimande didn't move in with Usagi. I was keeping my judgment in reserve but now I hope you've got something really horrible in store for him.

fiyero (Guest) commented (March 20th, 2010, 3:59 pm):
self destruct in five... four...
i imagined them all with the voices of sailor moon abridged since this is a humor oriented comic. sometimes i imagine zoisite being manlier, and i imagine some of the scouts iwth their english dub voices.

lovely_seraph (Guest) commented (March 22nd, 2010, 7:00 am):

lol- I think your voice descriptions are pretty spot on. Except... I never thought of zoi with a fussy british accent...

I LIKE THAT IDEA THOUGH. It just makes everything even funnier XD

you're so awesome! (Guest) commented (March 22nd, 2010, 2:32 pm):

I just spent...some two odd hours reading through your work when I should've been working. Time well wasted? Ooooh,yes.

You are all kinds! of! awesome!!! so awesome!!! I love your characterization of the generals, and you made Zoicite... work. Most shitennou-fic writers choose to brush over the whole Zoicite-was-gay bit (poor Mercury!!), but you! braved! through! murky! waters! and you rocked it. So awesome.

Excuse my overzealous exclamation marks, but they're the only way I can express my excitement that your work exists!!!!!! Please don't stoooopppppp!!! I will totally be OC-checking your page from now on. Woo!

(A part of me wonders if Naoko Takeuchi purposely did that painting with the senshi/shitennou to ensure Sailor Moon's immortality......and the other part wishes that she wrote/drew more about/of them, dammit...)

roxyk630 (Guest) commented (May 24th, 2010, 4:23 pm):


I love Diamond getting thwarted at his every move by SOMEONE. Can't wait to see who's next.

*snort* if things don't work out with Kunz maybe Minako can chase after Diamond for awhile... you know... to make him suffer a bit. :3 :3 :3

James Birdsong (Guest) commented (September 11th, 2010, 8:51 pm):

Cute awesome arrogance. Great page. Oh it is fun to be smug.

Beloved Dawn commented (February 24th, 2011, 1:38 am):
Australian Accents...
Oh. Oh dear. First panel. Add a wide-brim hat. "That's not a knife!"

Crocodile Diamond is born! Dunh dunh dunnnnn!

Second panel Kunz is awesome. And sexy.

Haha "Mamoru is not so supid as to drink coffee with mothballs floating in it."

Epic 'whatev' burn!!!!!!

I love your work. You are my hero.

yokogreyword commented (August 4th, 2013, 4:08 pm):

I love Kunzite in panel 3. He looks like he did from the anime; at least, from some of the better-drawn episodes.

ellorgast commented (January 28th, 2019, 12:27 am):

The casual foot stopping him, aw yeah.

"Is there some threat?" <3

shadowsphere21 (Guest) commented (January 30th, 2019, 8:09 pm):

Kunzite. Fourth panel. 'Nuff said. <3

Haru17 (Guest) commented (March 13th, 2019, 8:21 pm):

Kunzite's calm manner in handling problems like Dremande makes him one of my favorites...

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